Let's Rewrite the Story of Sonic Colors

I know it's not perfect. There are some things that I could have done to make this work better. But that would require changing even more about the story. And I really wanted to deviate from the original game as little as possible. And I came up with this over the course of about 3 days, so it's not the most thought out thing in the world. But I still like these ideas. Let me know if you did.

And as I said, re-examining the writing here, I'm honestly surprised that Pontac and Graff were hired again after this. It's bad. A good number of scenes are just regurgitating the same information the audience already has, and accomplish nothing. It's almost shocking how bad the writing is on a technical level.

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