Good vs Bad FANTASY Dialogue (Writing Advice)

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In this video, I analyse good and bad dialogue scenes from The Rings of Power, The Lord of the Rings, Eragon, and Narnia - all to help you write better dialogue in your fantasy novel.

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00:00 - Introduction
00:23 - What defines BAD fantasy dialogue?
02:17 - What defines GOOD fantasy dialogue?
04:59 - Special guests
05:42 - The Rings of Power
07:35 - The Chronicles of Narnia
09:58 - Eragon
12:54 - The Lord of the Rings

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